This was quite inspirational.
If you are one of those people that have an easy life, do not read any further.
When I read this, I thought: nobody has an easy life. I think, we all have our adversities. Every day is a challenge - and I think it is nice that you said to take a picture (or some sort of documentation) to compare as a benchmark. I tend to not realise how good I have it today, compared to when I was extremely depressed.
I know you had asked what can make your posts better. Here are my suggestions:
Use linebreaks and headings. Rather than have a lot of text after one another, it would be good to seperate with different subheadings.
If the topic allows, do reference and back-up your information by research.
As for the writing, I quite enjoyed it and it's good as it is. It was nice reading :)