I'm glad I found you in the FB group "We love steemit"!
That's an excellent post with a great message! Upvoted and resteemed :) I hope you will get some more attention for it, it would be really well deserved.
I've just one little recommendation for you (if I might...): If you use headlines and different fonts (font sizes), the legibility could be considerably improved. Having long parragraphs like the ones you've used in this article requires a lot of concentration to not getting lost in the middle of the text.
It may sound a bit ridiculous, but "try to write music". That means: use sentences with different numbers of words. That makes reading more entertaining, thus people will valuable your great efforts even more :)
Have a nice weekend!
glad to have someone like you ,
i'll take care of what you saying and thank's a bunch for this awesome comment
You are more than welcome and thank you :)
That is some great advise you give surfermarly - I could use that type of advise myself :) SUNSHINE247