What's up Steemians!
Here is another submission that I did for the #rapchallenge of week 9. Shout out to @rondonson for hosting this, give him some love and support if you can! I must say that I enjoyed all the entries aswell, cause everyone brought a different style and flow, really fresh!
Click here to check out this week's Rap Challenge Submission Post
My Submission
For this entry I chose to use the remade ''Nocturnal Rainbows'' instrumental, a song that was originally created by ''Hopsin''. I really didn't want to use the beat at first, because I like the original song way too much, for it would destroy my listening experience to the original one if I kept hitting it on repeat. But then I heard it was a remade version, which will always sound different or at least close to the original (which it did), and so I decided to use it.
But then time got in my way. I had some hardcore working days ahead of me with no time to create a full entry like I always do. It's not just spitting a verse for me. I take my time to rehearse the lyrics, spit it as perfect that I possibly can and take some effort to edit the vocals and make it sound as tight as possible. So at that same Friday (to me saturday night) I grinded out the whole night to get it done in time. I'm really glad I made it, but to me, personally, I didn't top my last entry, or at least I didn't got what I really wanted to deliver this week. That's just being honest, however I don't think that I made a bad entry in that matter. That night gave me the energy to grind it out and damn it felt good when I finished the submission while the morning sun arose, knowing that I had to go to work for the next 9 hours.
Anyway, that's why this post is a little late. I really hope you digged this entry, and please, let me know if you did!
Overthinkin'
Lyrics:
Always been a good kid, to you an averaged human being
I tried to fake it, but no longer can I live for stupid reasons
gave you my blessing as a pilgrim, but you're still bein' distracted/diss-track-ted
I guess you still ain't learning lessons and that's educated guessing
old slaves were in chains, new slaves are in denial
no more pain, wash your brains with this Novocaine and just be silent
I just picked this beat, because it portrays the worries within me,
thinkin' in advance and lay a verse oh so kingly
I be rushin' and crushin' the subject
with filosophical discussions
never take less, always something above it
and you can never stop it, never cop it
cause it's not for the profit
only for the knowledge
won't find it in college and scholars
cause all of this bustin' is not to be trusted
I'm beginnin' to puff, cause I'm runnin' too much
I can spit that syllable quickness
the formidable depth and the thickness
explicit and wreckless sentences
traditional brag 'n boast business
with invisable metaphors in it
or a critical message within, but
it has no value or wisdom if I can't tell you my realness
If you are interested, you can check out more of my music at:
Youtube
Soundcloud
For more art, music and what not, you can follow me @benja.
I hope you have a good day!
Have a glorious day and,
Fantastics :)
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Again, great as always :) You have my full upvote!
Steem on!
Thanks bruv! Much appreciated!
Nice post man. Liked the verse. If you have time, check out my submission, I'd appreciate your feedback.
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@fraze/steemit-rap-challenge-professor-fraze
Thank you! I'll head over and check it out once more ;)
You are killing it with the speed flow bruh. Looking forward to the next drop.
wow! youre a great artist, i really enjoyed this post.. being a hopsin fan im sure you have heard this new album from dizzy. check out my post for his new album.
https://steemit.com/music/@brandonmahoney/enjoying-good-music
Thank you man, glad you liked it! Yeah, Dizzy is a dope artist for sure, I was anticipating his second Golden Age Album/Tape , but didn't have a chance to give it a listen the past few days, so I'll get to that asap ;)
It's really great :) Thanks for ur sharing. awesome! (great rap!!)
I also recorded my song in my page. I am Korean but recorded a english song. If possible, please come and joy.
Told you my brother. Told you :)
Namaste
Namaste brother, Namaste!!
:)
F🔥RE
Quality is very good too.
Glad you are part of the contest man!
Check out my post:
"Why I Joined The Rap Challenge"
Appreciate it bruv, good post, lets keep the #steemhop going!