Great lyric! Imho, the flow is quite abrupt, and not quite on tempo, can use some improvement in that aspect. Still enjoyed it tho! Keep those bars coming brotha!
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Great lyric! Imho, the flow is quite abrupt, and not quite on tempo, can use some improvement in that aspect. Still enjoyed it tho! Keep those bars coming brotha!
The flow is abrupt yes, purposely not on tempo in some spots but melds clean. Thanks for the input, I go smooth next time see what ya think ;)