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RE: STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #20 - SPONSORED BY @TEAMSTEEM & @ADSACTLY - RHYME FOR SBD! WIN PRIZES

in #rapchallenge7 years ago (edited)

lehgo, daddy needs a new pair of shoes lol
i don't know if I'm doing this right @rondonson, this is my first week participating. lemme know!

#rapchallenge Swimming Pools (remix) | iQ Denim

Step outside to get payment, burger wrappers on pavement
Same streets I caught case in, right across from where we say amen
One to five, you might wonder why I still live in the state I got raised in
Sometimes I think the same but I ain’t got the time to waste in my brain
I got needs and kids
Anyone ask, I plead the fifth
Walking back to that crib I felt in my rib the need to grab heat and clip and didn’t listen
Prelude to a premonition, guess the alcohol was impairing the vision
But in hindsight, if my mind was right, then I probably would’ve seen him reaching in his pocket.
…Face gone.
[…Say sum]
…Would’ve spoke but his chrome's all on my taste buds
Focused on what I’m gonna do, they backing out real slow
If you're from the hood like I’m from the hood, then you probably already know

When they ran out the house, heard 2 or 3 shots on a street where the cops don’t drive
When you get robbed, only drug money gone solve shit
When they rob you, blood money can solve it

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Dope man, nice flow. Was a little mess up in the middle where when you rapped it for the video it didn't quite match up. But was really good, no question.

Thanks for the view, critique and support.

The video frame rate was one frame greater than the audio, so it lags behind a few times to catch up with the audio.

I'm not very good with video stuff but I'm learning.

Sweet, looking for more drops in the future man.

woow! genial

You flipped that "Swimming Pools" fam good stuff 🔥🔥🔥