I love your writing style, love how the story is told by dialogue, and absolutely love the story also!
But I'm dying to know who this Walker guy is. =O I want to knowwww what happens next! :D
Excellent writing though, and amazing use of the sentence!
Thank you very much for your entry!
@svashta, that means a lot! Thanks so much for taking the time to read my entry and for your kind words. It would be cool to finish this story - I'd like to know what happens too. Looking forward to your next contest prompt. :)
Wait, do I understand this correctly... You will continue this story using the next contest's constraint? haha :D That's a first, and it sounds quite splendid! :D