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RE: Short Story Review: The Weaver and the Snake By Blaine Vitallo

in #review6 years ago

I agree with you about the ending, it's a nice new image that is introduced, but to me it's too sweet and all-round let's leave with a positive thing. The ending has no direct link to me with the rest of it, and the like to being a destroyer herself is too weak. She has at most destroyed the will to live? But that's not really the point in the rest of the story.