Hi. It gives me work to read your stories because they have no spaces between paragraphs. I don't know if it's a writing style or an oversight.
In general, I liked several dialogues and the pace is very good.
"I guess I just have someone of a fashion sense from my sisters."
This dialogue, for example, opens immense possibilities in the narrative.
A cordial greeting. It was a pleasure to have read @madds19
Thank you for returning and reading my stories. I went through my latest one and tried to add spaces between paragraphs to help it be easier for reading and will eventually go through the others as well. I appreciate your feedback!