Allergies (Super Flash Fiction)

[ruth-girl]

^{CC0 image from: maxpixel.net}

Her whole life she had been allergic to dust.

Nevertheless, the family insisted on cremation.

Now the sneezing won't stop in the urn.

This is a flash piece I wrote at work about a month ago. I have experimented with 50-word pieces but one day I said, why not 15? I wrote several pieces but this one I could not get any shorter, however I really liked it so I thought I could share it here and get some feedback.

Anyways, soon I'll be posting my 15-word pieces.
Tell me how like that one!

^{More about the writer's "cult" on Whaleshares (click on the image to find out)}

Thank you so much for your time!

Until my next post,
Steem on and keep smiling, people!

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^{Original story by @ruth-girl - 2019 - All rights reserved
Also shared on my Whaleshares blog}

Comments

[nikosnitza]

Καταραμένη σκόνη είναι σαν τις κατσαρίδες δεν μπορείς να απαλλαγείς από αυτές πωπω τι συνειρμό έκανα παλι ο που.... Χαχχααα

[patschwork]

What an unpleasant eternity! :D

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