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RE: A New Body Experience (Serial Novel Pt. 1)

in #sci-fi6 years ago

I thought there would be a huge argument and not making up :D He must really be in love with her if he tolerates her addition and I think she knows very well already that she is addicted but doesn't want to admit it yet.

When he started to crack the eggs and was thinking so much I thought already that something will happen and there will be no breakfast :) I have such guy at home :D He means well but he can't keep focused and when he starts doing something else then I can forget about the meal or start doing it myself :D

Your story sounds quite real to me. I wonder how it will develop and if it will become more sci-fi..

It's strange what kind of impact the commercials have on us. I do understand why he doesn't want to do it but still goes for it cause he feels that 'I hate you' becomes little more real than he likes it to be :)

Thank you for reading! It's been a LONG story but very enjoyable and catchy :)

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I'm glad you're enjoying it! The sci-fi element is definitely going to build as the story goes along and the "Mind Leap" company comes front and center. Thanks for reading and for commenting!