It's difficult for me to comprehend your article due to the complexity of its information but never mind that. There are a few things I would like to state here:
- Your images were not cited
- You should cite your article's references
- Put some more images. Ensure that the image you were using was not copyrighted. Please refer here if you're not familiar with what I was talking about.
- There are some words which seem like a typo, I couldn't understand it (can't even pronounce it). It is a good idea to reread your article before hitting the post button.
