Concerning the length, I personally won't change a thing. That is perfect and the posts reads itself easily. I am looking forward to the next episode then :)
Also note that you may want to be using the following syntax for the images,
to make the images visible on steemstem.io. Just pasting a link is in fact not fully compliant with markdown.
Thank you again, I hope I won't disappoint
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