Nice story. Are you planning to continue it? I'm no good at writing fiction and this sort of thing involves radical ideas. Keep it up
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Nice story. Are you planning to continue it? I'm no good at writing fiction and this sort of thing involves radical ideas. Keep it up
My plan is to continue writing with advice and criticism from you and anyone else who wants to contribute. If you have any comments feel free. Where do you think it should go from here? what have i done wrong? what could I do better?
Like that.
but the vandal is making it more difficult.