The storytelling on this one is excellent. It builds. I flashbacked to my first true love. Not the same, but the same. She wrote me a 10 page letter and left in the middle of the night. She said all the right things, (sorry, not good enough for u, etc). Didn't help. I can still see her face after 38 years and remember little details about her. You never entirely get over it, but move on. Great post.
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Oh, lord, that sounds like mine: he wrote me a long letter, gave it to me at night, but told me not to open it until the morning. In the morning, he vanished. The letter just said that everything he felt for me was a lie, something to just forget about. This was my first "true love". Turns out he had another girlfriend 4 states away and I was just some sort of dalliance to him. It destroyed me and I stopped eating, like for weeks.
I too was brought back to that time. The Writer is really good and he should consider writing books as he is very observant and a very sensitive person. Being highly sensitive makes two things: great writers and broken hearts.
Im back!!!!ahaha!!!