Anyway...
Was it just me or was the story a little messy - it felt like the author was jumping around in his narration ? Don't get me wrong the story was hot, I just feel like it was shortened. - The girl touched his dick and suddenly it was in her and as quickly as it went in, it went out and they were finished lol. Don't know why I'm talking about this...
I don't think I could have beared cheating on my girl in this way. Don't get me wrong, I probably wouldn't be able to resist if a girl practically threw herself at me and I found her hotter than Satans dick (WHAT ?!), I just couldn't bear it and would probably have ended that relationship.
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You are not wrong, the art of writing is fast disappearing if people find this good writing! Sloppily written in my opinion. But a sign of the times in this oh-too fast and disposable world we now live in.
Having said that, I think I can learn from this and maybe get me some coins!
Haha, you do that !