This was really good, Odin! Your close-up cinematography choices really pulled that tension in. Your abrupt editing, dark overtones and sound effects almost reminded me of DM Pranks' Killer Clowns Scare Pranks series.
There was closure here as well with the wife switching places with you at the end - I liked that. Your camera movements were super dynamic as well. Keep up this type of content. Really impressed!
I appreciate the feedback @Markis. I love your atention to detail. Thank you so much for watching. I have more to come =)