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RE: THE HARROWING TALE

in #shortstory7 years ago

Wow great story. It also touched on the issue of abuse in marriage.the woman is the victim most times and she still chooses to stay with the man probably for her kids or she has no means to care for herself. You have a way with words. Good job. Next time try to put spaces between each paragraph to make it easier on the eyes

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Thanks @ earth angel...And i'll abide by your correction on subsequent posts.