This is my entry for Steemit Slam 1, a short poem called LETTER FROM A LONELY SOUL. Feedback is much appreciated. https://steemit.com/slam/@remedygear/letter-from-a-lonely-soul-steemit-slam-wk-1
Also I totally recommend you check out this short and beautiful piece below
https://steemit.com/slam/@class5/steemit-slam-poem-unexpected-departure