On let out
.
upon release,
free me:
and secrecy.
a lean-to
of claritied candy,
to reprimand me.
each day,
a dollop less:
to my egress.
writing & images
by @d-pend
Oct. 30,2018
On let out
and secrecy.
to reprimand me.
to my egress.
writing & images
Oct. 30,2018
on let out
upon release,
free me:
all steel bars
and secrecy.
a lean-to
of claritied candy,
pink certitude
to reprimand me.
each day,
a dollop less:
a dollar spent
to my egress.
@d-pend,
We live in glided cages of our own making. The Land of the Free ... just without the freedom.
Or, perhaps, Daniel got a speeding/parking ticket and this is the 'song of rebellion' he sings on his way to the courthouse to pay it.
Quill
I find this poem slightly disturbing. Part of me reads this simply thinking there is a price we must pay to leave something behind. Another sick part of me reads this very anatomically. Overall I see a poem about the price of freedom and question, "Is there any other way out?"
Beautiful, but sad poems, especially "pink confidence" :)
Hi @magnata... nice to hear from you! Enjoy a day of fuchsia and chrome.
Pictures of lack of freedom. Symbolism of the mental lack of freedom of people.
I enjoyed reading your words here, along with the photography accompanying them. Hope your day is a happy one.
Dear @d-pend sir!
Splendid smartphone photography of peaceful atmosphere. Looking attractive these colour and black white photography.
beside it Another creative poetry of A creative mind.
Nice poem and great photos to match verse.
Nice poetry sharing bro.
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Welcome.
A wonderful poem that accompanies beautiful photographs.
congratulations .
I wish you a good day
Thank you for the kind response. Have a great day, too :-)
So beautiful poems with very beautiful pictures are super good!
Thank you for being here for me, so I can be here for you.
Enjoy your day and stay creative!
Botty loves you. <3
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