I like it, but the part of this written before "THE PROPOSED AGREEMENT" seems petty, unprofessional, and unneeded.
But I think, unless someone puts up good arguments, this is easy to support.
I am not sure if something like this would be clarity, just so it is not open to interpretation, if I has a large hive holder, that would be the part that concerned me?
"(Unless there is some systemic danger for SPL and the funds are needed asap)"
I always thought we should have asked for more but offered more of a commitment too, but I like this.
Oh yes my friend. It was absolutely needed. ;)