Can you include a deadline for the release of Rebellion as part of this proposal?
My suggested language is something like: "Steem Monsters Corp guarantees that the Rebellion set will be released no later than 12/31/2023. For every day the release of the Rebellion set is delayed past 12/31/2023, Steem Monsters Corporation will return $1,000 USD back to the DAO."
This is smart to include contingencies. Any other organization hiring a contractor or freelancer would have upfront expectations with measurable KPIs to audit the results of the work against.
In addition to your suggestion I'd also like to see some form of guarantied sales. If X packs do not sell, Splinterlands Co. will reimburse the DAO based on missed % etc.