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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #17: 199 words, 10SBD prize pool!

in #stach7 years ago

Gabriel was a very handsome and wealthy businessman, one of those who had more than one girlfriend. He presumed the luxuries, his life was perfect.

He had many parties in his mansion where he met a beautiful woman named Pamela, they dated several times and finally they fell in love and got married, once again life consented him because he had everything what he wanted to.

Gabriel had days feeling strange, he heard voices that whispered his name without knowing where they came from. He thought he was going crazy.

One day he felt that his body was so light that it lacked gravity and floated away from his house, like a feather that flutters in the air.

Suddenly he opened his eyes and everything around him changed, he was intubated in a hospital, as a result of a traffic accident that he had had for driving drunk. People around him shouted for joy although he did not understand.

Gabriel was poor but very loved by his family, especially by his mother who never stopped crying at the great miracle.

His life was very different from that parallel world that he had created, living there a twisted fantasy.

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te quedo muy bien tu relato amiga, te deseo mucha suerte en el concurso!