Nice article, @bait002!
I'm short on time today, so I'll just give you this one suggestion for an English language improvement edit:
Majority will agree with me that, this era is one of the most exciting time to be alive. We live in an age of endless possibilities and unlimited shots at success. A world where with the aid of technology and modernization life has been made easy and simplified. We live live in an age where grooming our minds have become extremely cheap that all it would cost us is time.
- The majority will agree with me that this era is one of the most exciting times in which to be alive. We live in an age of endless possibilities, and unlimited shots at success. A world where, with the aid of technology and modernization, life has been made easy and simplified. We live in an age where grooming our minds has become extremely cheap, so that all it costs us is time.
There are other possibilities, of course. This is just one suggestion. Great job!
Cheers!
@mitneb
Thanks. I'll make the adjustments. @mitneb
Your welcome, @bait002! I'm glad you like my suggestions, and are benefitting from them.
Cheers!
@mitneb
Thank you so much
No problem, @bait002! I see that you have made the corrections I suggested. That motivates me to continue helping you to develop and grow as a writer. Thanks for taking me up on my offer, and submitting a link for my consideration every day. Maybe more of my curated people will begin to take me up on my offer for additional curation when they see how you are benefiting. You are doing a great job with your articles. Keep it up.
Cheers!
@mitneb