This is my Entry for the contest
Title: Confused
With the rain lashing against the window, Linda got out of bed and drew back the curtains to look through the heavy rain. She moved to make herself coffee and went back to sleep refusing to think of going to work under the rain. Few minutes into a sudden sleep, she felt like she heard a knock at the door.
‘Who could this be under this rain?’ she said to herself. She gets up and heads towards the door. Looking through the door holds, she sees a man hurrying back with the umbrella torn by the wind looking completely drenched. She thought of opening up quickly to call him back as she realizes that it is Jim, the guy who walked her home the night before from the movie but she kept the key in the kitchen table. She gets the key and rushed into the rain calling out to him as she ran towards the road. As she runs towards the bus stop, calling out to him, she realized from the stares of passersby something that made her stop. She wasn’t wearing a slipper on her feet and worst off; her transparent wet night gown reveals her nakedness…
lolz... this is a very funny piece. i was actually expecting a different ending, but this is epic. just imagining how that will really look in real life. still laughing hard
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good stuff
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i can only imagine who shameful she will feel having such an experience. Great story if you ask me.
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Hahahaha,i guess it was mostly men who were staring at her transparent wet night gown
Nice piece here bro.
haahahahah. that will really send some disturbing thoughts through her mind. thanks