great flow, I will promote you to sf6. My headphones only have one side working so I don't know if the left side would have compensated for the lack of vocals, but your voice should be more prominent and dry (don't use as much echo)..Your poetry and performance style is perfect though, your recording and productin technique needs improvement and that is not your fault.
Try different microphone angles and placements and different rooms with different levels of echo and you will send chills down the spines of your listeners
Wow @dimimp, thank you sir. I will work on my voice by going for more voice training and rehearsals. I'm grateful for the promotion in advance.
@dimimp, Please sir assist me with some liquid Steem like I said earlier to offset some bills off my neck. I need to concentrate on the projects I have for steemjet. Thank you sir.