Based on this post, I think good formatting would go a long way. Use:
- Headings
- Subheadings
- More photos
You can check out my recent post and look through posts on the front page to give yourself a better idea of what performs well. https://steemit.com/steemit/@shenanigator/what-william-learned-the-hard-way-your-strategy-may-be-crippling-your-steemit-potentential