Oh, this is a nice simplified explanation. My one suggestion would be to link to the proposals themselves (while tagging the person involved) so readers will know the proposals you are breaking down and those making the proposals can clarify if there is anything incorrect in the assessment. Thanks so much for doing this!
If you need links to the proposals/names of those doing them let me know and I can copy from the post so you have them all.
I was hesitant to do that at first. Too many links. I think I will put in survey if they submitted it and proposal post if not.
I will update in a few hours since that is more than a phone task.