That's a super haiku. Okay lemme try my haiku
Rainbow of my life
Colors my life my love
Made by my love
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That's a super haiku. Okay lemme try my haiku
Rainbow of my life
Colors my life my love
Made by my love
@ainie.kashif - I love the love-life-colours-rainbow-mix!! Pretty groovy and vibey!
Rainbow in my life, (5 syllables correct and cool)
My colors! My life! My love! (needs 7 syllables - so I added one)
Made with all my love. (needs 5 syllables - so - I added one)
Lemme know what you think of the @rlt47 & @ainie.kashif collaboration :))
Muahaha... that's so nice. Yes my haiku is weak. Okay, Master Haiku... I will try again. I applaud this haiku collaboration that made the best Rainbow Haiku with love lol... have a nice day!
@ainie.kashif - It wasn't weak at all. I sometimes get my syllable count wrong too even in contests.
We should work on some more together, I like you word selections :))
Hi @rlt47, I have made a post on this rainbow Haiku. Here it is https://steemit.com/haiku/@ainie.kashif/hhg8-a-rainbow-haiku-dedicated-to-all-nature-lovers
I just felt that it should not be missed and forgotten. Making a post on it is the only way to make sure it get appreciated right.
Yes we should continue making Haiku together. Absolutely a fine art in making Haiku, I now feel the excitement of creating Haiku hahaha.
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that is just a masterpiece ..
looking at this i can say
" You can sing a rainbow, sing a rainbow, sing along with me!
RED and YELLOW and PINK and GREEN!
PURPLE and ORANGE and BLUE "
awesome @ainie.kashif
stay blessed :)
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Lol @rlt47, I have to be pessimist here. I think it is very difficult to get to a whale position. Not impossible but very difficult but you really did make me laugh out loud here.
We will make many haikus together, that's awesome!