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RE: Langdon Bennett - The invisible thief - Der unsichtbare Dieb - Chapter 3, Scene 2. - based on the STEEMPUNK-NET-UNIVERSE

in #steemit7 years ago

this is great....I started to read it but then I decided I need to go back to the beginning! Thanks for doing this and bringing the steempunk world to life :)

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Thank you very much, its just the Story in progress. Its the first draft. When i`m finnished, i will bring it into a ebook :)

excellent! My only suggestion would be you might need some sort of editor to flesh out some of the English language/meaning - I'm assuming your translating it from German. But don't let that take away from the fact I still think it's excellent!

Yes thats difficult.
I think, when its finnished and i have enough money, i need a professional translator for this job.

In my spare time I might give it a go, starting with the first one; if you don't care....

oh thats realy nice.
At the moment, its all in progress. At the end of the first draft i will recover the story and the beginn must change to a better one :)

sounds good; just know that I'm willing whenever you move to another draft of it :)