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RE: Success Is a Process That We Repeat Every Day, Believe In Yourself

in #steemit7 years ago

sorry sir. I just want to comment on the length of your post. in the science of journalism I have ever studied. long paragraphs will make the eyes melting. therefore, you should make a paragraph consisting of five to six lines.

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Thank you very much, I learn english only 8 months

Im sorry sir. Thats not about your english. Couse my english not good. It not about the idea.

When i say my opinion. Just about long paragraph. My tecaher who are ths journalist say to me. If i write, made one paragraph with five or six line. After that, gift one enter to next paragraph

Thank you for advice

Wellcome sir. You can watch at youtube with keyword "tempo institute"

Iam sorry for my comment