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RE: I've Been Asked to Write an Article About Steemit for an online tech site. Your Chance to be My Editor for this Important Post

in #steemit7 years ago

There's some spelling and sentence fragmentation... but it's just a draft, so yeah. Content structure makes sense with the assumption that the audience isn't technology illiterate. Presentation is lacking, but yeah, again, it's a draft... I really don't have much to contribute... why am I even writing this comment?!

Guess I just wanted to say "Hi" :P

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thanks @googlyeyes. I intentionally put a jumbly draft up in the hope that it would inspire some input. you are of course correct. There's always some spelling / typos and sentence fragmentation.. I tend to write almost as a stream of conscious and edit later. it is for a tech website (but not a crypto focused one). what would you suggest to improve the presentation. ? thanks for the input btw

now look... somebody forgot to switch accounts there... hehehe

improve the presentation, like removing the typos and structuring sentences, lol. I found it hard to contribute something valuable at that stage and just felt like goofing around :D

vague advice taken ! I have to finish and submit it this week so I will edit this draft and present it for you for final sign off. It's nice having an editor !