There's some spelling and sentence fragmentation... but it's just a draft, so yeah. Content structure makes sense with the assumption that the audience isn't technology illiterate. Presentation is lacking, but yeah, again, it's a draft... I really don't have much to contribute... why am I even writing this comment?!
Guess I just wanted to say "Hi" :P
thanks @googlyeyes. I intentionally put a jumbly draft up in the hope that it would inspire some input. you are of course correct. There's always some spelling / typos and sentence fragmentation.. I tend to write almost as a stream of conscious and edit later. it is for a tech website (but not a crypto focused one). what would you suggest to improve the presentation. ? thanks for the input btw
now look... somebody forgot to switch accounts there... hehehe
improve the presentation, like removing the typos and structuring sentences, lol. I found it hard to contribute something valuable at that stage and just felt like goofing around :D
vague advice taken ! I have to finish and submit it this week so I will edit this draft and present it for you for final sign off. It's nice having an editor !