Well, if you want that effect, try having two or more elements in your reveal. Then dole them out. To get them to the end, use a payoff there, but don't tell them it's going to be at the end, or they'll just skip ahead. I would definitely recomend playing up the editor a little more, what has it done for you? Sure, effiiciency, but, I was able to get my story finished in time to do x.
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