RE: Fifty-Word Fiction Frenzy: A Community Collaboration

[riskdebonair]

Shiiii-iet! Well over 50 words. I can't do this. 50 words is too short.

I love the idea though and will be following.

Comments

[son-of-satire]

Yes, well over. Lol. I don't think that matters though. As long as it is one paragraph it should be good.

It may be better to end it at;

If only I had known that what I would gain would be lost along with everything else.

Then it won't be overly lengthy.

Good entry though, and thanks for participating. You might want to give this a resteem to give as many people as possible the opportunity to vote for your submission.

[rigaronib]

Agreed! I enjoy this one, but I would definitely end it where you suggested and pick up there with the next entry. Writing isn't my forte, but I enjoyed reading this entry a lot.

[riskdebonair]

Or to vote for whatever submission they prefer 😉

[son-of-satire]

Well yes. That is what I meant. Lol.

I just worry there won't be enough votes to make it interesting as this is the first installment and no one really knows about it yet.

[riskdebonair]

It will grow.