hmm. well I have to say that this also doesn't work. It seems that when you got to the point you ended the article. Just some constructive criticism. Hopefully you'll take it as such. That is also why I can't say much about the article itself other than that money tends to come from indirect sources. Unless you want less of it.
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Hahaha thanks for being honest my dude! :)
Yeah, see what happened was I wrote the entire article out, and it initially had 4 main paragraphs of info. So what I did is I simply made the first 2 paragraphs 'part 1', and the second 2, part 2. So yeah, I agree it could've been constructed better lol.
So what's the conclusion here? Do you think I shouldn't do it like this in the future? Is it not good? Or do you think it can work fine?
Thanks brother!
Well to be honest, I just hate it when things stop at "to be continued", even though I'm not the most hurried up type :)
Hahaha yeah that's understandable :P