This feeling of emptiness, or was it Darkness
Taking over every cell in my body.
I stand on this earth
Staring at the Tree on the other side,
A tree As dark as my subconscious,
Train of thoughts sprawling in this
system,
A chain reaction
Colliding,callous and catatonic.
For the choices made,
Irrespective of the outcome.
For all those heart breaks,
Which reached a dead-end.
For all those creatures in life,
For whom i never existed.
All these just trickery, illusions;
A phase to be long forgotten,
Lessons learned.
There were times of despair,
Maddening sometimes Liberating.
Blame it on fate.
Karma is a Bitch ain't it?
But who cares...
Darkness kicks in.
But all these deep thoughts
By only staring at a tree?
Clouds of silence clogging on this psyche
A carpet of emptiness has been laid
It is this essence of being alone that is to
be understood to tame the beast.
The feeling of eternal Bliss,
Unparalleled by any other sentiment,
Realizing the true meaning of our
existence.
But know this
Everything has a purpose
A prologue, ultimately an epilogue,
But realizing you tread on this path of life
Being victims of casualty,
It is you who should stand for yourself.
Now Embrace it, this circumstance of
Solitude and darkness...
hey noisyboy I like your cartoons a lot... I hope that you understand what @danielsaori is explaining to you in his reply.... You don't want to get a reputation as someone who cheats, so you should explain to him that you understand and that you won't do it again!
You have lots of talent, don't make a mistake by not listening to those that are trying to help you like @danielsaori! You are one of my favorite newbies, and I hope you stay that way!!! :)
And ps.. you won't get in trouble if you admit that you did take it from somewhere else... We all learn from mistakes so don't be afraid to admit it! It will actually earn you some respect! Trust me ;)
I'm sorry, I understand.!!
I was away for a few days.sorry for late reply.
good @noisyboy... that's how to fix your mistake... Just admit it and apologize and learn from it... I think you have a future.. I don't want to see you mess it up! ;)
Okay ^_^, Thankyou
Hey people,
@noisyboy here!!.
Darkness, the definition of darkness is different for everybody. You need something to relate it from your life, to understand it.
I have explained darkness the best way i con. Poems are quite useful in expressing yourself in a quite vague manner.
but I'm no Poet. lol.
Forgve me if it is bad..haha!! i usually don't write down anything that comes to my head.
This was such a deep topic, wanted to express my point of view the best way possible.
I create short comics and an amateur at that too.
Anyway..Thankyou for the opportunity.
and thank you #newbieresteemday for everything.
It was you guys who gave my first episode of my comic a shoutout and resteemed it.
I created the pic for the above poem in Pixton where i also create my comics.
Cheers
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Would have been nice if you had used more of your own words instead of copying a majority from here:
https://straightoutofsoul.wordpress.com