I vould like to provide some criticism. In my opinion you are using word '' also '' way to often, it's kinda bad, because there are plenty of synonyms for this word, it would make speech a little bit better, that's just my opinion. I agree with you that reducing holidays by one week is a really bad idea. I finished my studies few years ago, and i always had atleast 2, mostly 3 weeks for christmas holidays. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank You for the constructive criticism, I will try to use a variety of different words instead of also in my next piece of work thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Matthew