Dear all,
Here is my 5th submission, a villanelle.
UNCONDITIONAL REVENGE
by Ikhwanul Halim
I'm a man, really a man, but my heart not made from steel.
when you turn away, spit off my dignity
as a man, a very gentle-man; a human that can feel.
You never aware, I am being patient like a moray eel,
the man you called him father, he owes me tons of money,
I'm a man, really a man, but my heart not made from steel.
"time heals wound," they said; but mine never heal,
burnt with jealousy, anger, painful agony,
as a man, a very gentle-man; a human that can feel.
debt maturity date; to your father I shouted: kneel!
my heart continues to bleed, an incure malady.
I'm a man, really a man, but my heart not made from steel.
at the altar, beauty in white to seal a deal;
you look at me with pity, ready for an unholy matrimony ...
as a man, a very gentle-man; a human that can feel—
so why, my love; my soul begins to squeal?
alas! I won’t let anyone hurt you, not even me.
I'm a man, really a man, but my heart not made from steel.
As a man, a very gentle-man; a human that can feel.
Bandung, March 11, 2018
This is my 5th submission for 100 Day Poetry Challenge conceived by Daniel Pendergraft @d-pend. I am still a beginner in English poems.
If you want to participate, please do not hesitate to join Steemit School discord.
A timely reminder to consider feelings. I was truly moved by that poem.
Thank you. I really appreciate your appreciation,
@hopehuggs 😊
Masih 95 hari lagi, ya....
Semangaaat. 😉
Thank you 😊
great poem...
love it
Thank you, bro @tanza-erlambang. How are you? Congratulation for your book sales 😊👍
Hi, @ayahkasih, the phrase is very inside. "A kind man" I invite you to read mine. Thank you.
¡Muchas gracias! 😊
Tancap gassss.....
Memang aturannya 1 hari 1 puisi, bang @imansembada 😅