This is really well done @theverve. You managed, with simple language, to convey quite accurately the feeling of man under the spell of the woman he adores. (At least, it matches my experience as a male!)
Thanks for prefacing it as you did. Really commendable job writing from a perspective outside yourself! I also enjoyed the indentations of lines, it gave it an interesting and pleasing shape.
Thank you. I wasn't quite sure I nailed it but I feel much better about it now.