UP UP UP, that was good man. I like this line here "My emotions fell deep in the sea like an anchor" I can just imagine it falling fast to the seabed. Good rhyming, made perfect sense and easy to understand . ( I think I need to revisit rhyming and get out of this free from critiques said i should do.
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It's good to practice different writing patterns... Be it with rhythm or without.
Thank you so much for the feedback my Jamaican friend.... It feels good to get comment from a great poet.