You made your home on the couch,
on the porch, in the sun.
And one day we both said hello.
And meant it.
This verse is rich in pathetic fallacy, I saw the imagery you intend to paint and it seemed very wonderful, the fact that is seemed so romantic made me feel goosebumps.
I don't know your gender but this certainly has a feminine touch to it.
It's beautiful I'm a big fan.
I was going less for the romantic, and more for the soul connection, but certainly glad it moved you. Goosebumps are a powerful response to these words. It is ultimately about friendship, and it's loss. As for my gender, I am male, but I have no problem with these sorts of topics.
Thanks for your comment :)
Amazing writer you are.
Thank you.