KEEP CHASTISING ME! - Day 41 of the 100 Days of Poetry Challenge

[levitated-mind]

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KEEP CHASTISING ME

Keep chastising me
Till I clear your avarice with my benevolence
Keep enticing me
Till I filch your carcass in my ambulance

Your rain descending wearily
Your roots getting clamped merrily.

Keep chastising me
Till your chances end and your fences melt
Your yellow dreary rains ,your fellow gentle lanes
Dress your wounds with salt till you chop your faults
You burgled my goal then mumbled and howled
I maintain my Dane and ignore the pain

My stars twinkled but I still mingled
You parched my kits and numbed my wits

Keep chastising me
I m here and there. Flog me with care
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#NOTE:
This is entry for day 41 of the 100 Days of Poetry Challenge by @d-pend.
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Comments

[doktarufas]

I like the way you mix ambulance with a century old images.... creatively bringing the message into perspective!

Thanks - in Swahili we say Shukran

[levitated-mind]

I'm overwhelmed that you got the message vividly.
Thank you for your feedback - in Russian "спасибо" and in Yoruba "eshe"