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RE: 100 Days of Poetry / Day 16 - Nothing / Ništa - Original poetry / art

That's the first time that I'm actually reading your poem!

The beginning is really catchy, with the yawning morning, I felt warm... I physically felt myself in bed under a blanket that is keeping the warmth of my body.

And the final questions seemed odd to me at first:
Are we ant in the Cosmos (so tiny and meaningless), a killer in a courtroom (so guilty) or
a lover without love (so desperate)? I love this strong ending that leaves us with an open-ended question...

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Thank you @liverussian for stopping by :D I'm glad my poem gave you some feelings and it made you think...

Much love, Luka.