the goddess
The expanse of the sky great perfect
dominate with the stars of the sky
But one star that incandescent
down greeted me
There are spoken words spoken
There is peace that I feel
When the rays touch my face
My grief was ... erased.
The universe was all smiles
Ducking and worshiping presence
Fascinated I stared at his face
I feel I know him
But there is no know where
Only my heart can answer it
empress set the value
My search was over
do you know goddess
I always imagine you in every imagination
Thinking of you every time ...
That's my only ...
I can not get a goddess like you ...
You are like Queen of the Beauty Country
And me, only able to be your footsteps ...
indonesia
Sang dewi
Hamparan langit yang sangat sempurna
Bertahta bintang - bintang angkasa
Namun satu bintang yang berpijar,
Teruntai turun menyapa ku
Ada kata-kata yang diucapkan lisan
Ada kedamaian yang saya rasakan
Saat sinar menyentuh wajahku
Kesedihanku ... terhapus.
Alam semesta semua tersenyum
Menunduk dan menyembah kehadiranmu
Terpesona aku menatap wajahnya
Aku merasa aku mengenalnya
Tapi tidak ada yang tahu dimana
Hanya hatiku yang bisa menjawabnya
permaisuri mengatur nilainya
Pencarian saya selesai
apakah kamu seorang dewi
Saya selalu membayangkan engkau dalam setiap imajinasi
Memikirkanmu setiap saat ...
Itu satu-satunya ...
Aku tidak bisa mendapatkan dewi sepertimu ...
Engkau seperti Ratu Negara Kecantikan
Dan aku, hanya bisa menjadi langkahmu ...
note:
This poem tells of a beautiful woman like a goddess, who fascinated me with her tenderness.
the goddess
I am very grateful to a great writer that is @d-pend and steemitschool. for having accepted me as a participant of the 100-day challenge of poetry.
thank you for reading a poem from a beginner like me, I know my poem is still many shortcomings, so from that I try to learn better again, from the writers of great poetry.
thank you
For me poetry should always come from the heart, your poem does just that. It is a great start, well done.
sorry I am still a novice in writing poetry.
but I'm not good in English.
i am sure you also know my english is bad.
Thank you for the advice
Beautiful poem and images @rizky05. I'm happy you included in your mother tongue and English both :-D
Please have fun on the journey!
P.S. also add one small link to the Steemit School Discord at the bottom of your poems: https://discord.gg/hyfYQ9P
thank you @ d-pend
I have added a small link / link discord in my second poem.