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RE: Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge Day #88--After the Discontent

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

That autumn to winter metaphor is powerful. I try the same often and fail. In one i wrote Popcorn Blessing - I dealt with just spring and fading of time, and love or something also.

Your poem is very good. It is an honour to resteem your poem!

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Thanks much. I will check out your piece as soon as I collect my thoughts. I have been having a strange week.