SSP 100 Day Challenge (Day 1): Destello en mis ojos | flash in my eyes|

[zyllor]

Fuente

SSP 100 Day Challenge (Day 1):

I'm beginner, it's my first poem. Thank @d-pend

Destello en mis ojos

(Flash in my eyes)

Colmaste de una alegría inocente mi primer buen destello en mis ojos con aquella llegada insolente me he robado de ti tus enojos	You fill out of an innocent joy my first good flash in my eyes with that insolent arrival I have stolen your anger from you
Bastó vivir feliz a tu lado y llenarme de sabiduría con todo el puro amor que me has dado hiciste de tu vida la mía	I just had to live happily by your side to fill me with your wisdom with all the love that you have given me You made your life mine
Ayer ya tus ojos se cerraron y no logro superar tu ausencia casi mis anhelos se borraron mi sueños reclama tu presencia	Yesterday your eyes closed and I can not overcome your absence with you my dreams were erased my cry claims your presence
De tu estirpe el gran ser que medré en mi fiel corazón tu amor, padre	From your lineage the being that thrived in my heart for your love, father

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Announcing the Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge! (Total Prize Fund 2000 SBD)

Comments

[acousticsteveo]

Great job. I love seeing the two languages side by side like you did. That was very creative. I think this is going to be awesome having people that speak two languages in this contest because for people like me I can kind of absorb another language even though I may not be learning it I can have exposure to it. This is great. And I really like your poem.

[galletikasar]

Hermoso poema @zyllor , hasta una lagrima corrió por mi mejilla de tan solo imaginar melancólica despedida : (
Un saludo desde mi cocina.