Am not good with art but here is my little contribution.
For the page one, we could give the main character name as "Belinda"
was (doing something that she does all the time because she loves to do it, something with nature(what is she doing? Let's say she was farming in the valley when the shining 🌟 star fell. Farming is nature
Nice name.
Lol..belinda, that's a sweet name
REPLY TO YOUR QUESTIONS
THAT IS ALL I GOT.
Good job my boss!!
WHAT DO YOU THINK?
Here you have explained that fact that crypto mining is more environmental friendly that Gold mining!! This is because "if the miners were of crypto, they wouldn't have destroyed Happie's home and pollute it.
TOO LONG?
Well not really because it make up the idea you are trying to explain.
TOO SHORT?
25 pages of a kid's book is not quit to shot, it will make them feel very proud of finishing there book when they do.!!
JUST RIGHT?
Just right!!
YOU HAVE REALLY DONE A GRATE JOB HERE MY BOSS!! BRAVO!!
I AM SOLIDLY BEHIND YOU!!
@mbj
This is amazing
Belinda has a nice ring to it