Steemjet for the Scene (New Work)

[shrazi]

Hi,

Yesterday I draw a SteemJet for the story Scene "Olivia And The Super Star" by @dimimp,

You can click here to see yesterday Drawing.

Some of my good friends @shuta and @meher04, suggest me if I can draw a jet type, Not airplane...

So I take their advice positively and try to draw another Jet.

its the Final Look Of Jet, will use it on story page 21.

Here Are the Steps I use to Complete this

this Above Drawing was final from my side, But I share it with @shuta, and he suggest me to remove fan/blade. As he Always give me good suggestion (No Doubt), when I remove it looks awesome.

You can see my final design above (First Pic of the post) Thanks Again @shuta and @meher04 So now I will use this jet when working on 21 page of the story

Hope you enjoyed my working

Thanks for visit my Post

Take Care

Comments

[shrazi]

@shuta also suggest me to add Steemjet wording on the Jet. I will do it when working on the Scene...

[dimimp]

I would go with the first design, this is a kids book and the classic jet style serves 2 purposes:

1. It can land and introduce shartzy without looking too out of the ordinary (as if a UFO landed).

2. This playful looking "jet" can fly to other planets is a concept that is best left for introduction AFTER the reader has familiarized themsselves with the jet

Right now shrazi has been adding elements that match texturally within his overall visual concept

And the twist in the story with steemjet landing and introducing SMT is going to go waaaay over the heads of most, therefore, it is best to delay the introduction of the most confusing and difficult to comprehend concepts as late in the story as possible, so at this point in the story, I suggest we land a rather "normal" looking "jet" on the ground so as not to let the reader know that he is about to take a trip to the moon, this will make the trip to outer space all the more impactful, because we won't lose the reader until the moment we launch. We don't want to lose the reader when a UFO lands here now

[mbj]

You have all.. SImplicity is the key.. SO THE KIDS WILL UNDERSTAND.

[empato365]

Forgive me @shrazi but please just Permit me to do this here. @Dimimp pays attention to you submission so I just want him to see mine too. Thanks for understanding friend.

TO @DIMIMP
Excuse me sir. I think you should see this. It is for page 25 of the story book.(for 500$ bounty) Olivia and the superstar

Please let me know what you think. Thanks

[shrazi]

Its ok dear @empato365 from my side :D

[empato365]

Thank you very much

[rjunaid12]

Haha
@shrazi is a star

[empato365]

Yeah he Is

[rjunaid12]

Awesome work as always, @shrazi

[shrazi]

thanks for the complimentThanks @rjunaid12

[ellybraimah]

Nice post,very creativeGreat post.Sir @dimimp will be happy to steemjet to Kings landing.LOl

[shrazi]

thanks for liking my workThanks @ellybraimah, every comment worth for me

[meher04]

But I just can suggest you, and its my pleasure that you took it
Your work is really awesome, and I enjoyed your working
Keep working and complete the story. GOOD LUCKThanks @shrazi, for mentioning me :D

[shrazi]

Welcome dear, I was really think to see your story pages, But I know you don't have much time, But I seen your art work for steemjet and bird, those are Nice

[francis05]

Keep it up, I'm impressed with your work @shrazi

[shrazi]

Thanks dear for the compliment

[talhakhalil]

REALLY AWESOME @shrazi

[shrazi]

Thanks Boss

[abdulmanan]

great work brother!
keep it up.

[shrazi]

Thanks @abdulmanan

[aamirijaz]

That's really awesome work done by you! Keep it up brother.

[shrazi]

Thanks for the compliment Dear

[shuta]

I'm glad i can help out in one way or the other.

Keep up the good work buddy :)Thanks for the mentions @shrazi I'm sure @dimimp will love this as always.

[shrazi]

You always helped me, when ever I asked for, and you suggest me yourself as well... THANKS for everything.
And Yes I will try to do my best

[david-beckham]

My design for @dimimp sir