You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Pure in essence with a touch of it's own spirit and he breathed life into it.It should be its own instead of it's own.
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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Pure in essence with a touch of it's own spirit and he breathed life into it.It should be its own instead of it's own.
nice story i like it keep it up very motivated