I admit that at first I thought it was long. but I decided to read it. I feeling that I was seeing legolas and the dwarf. of the movie "Lord of the Ring" although in any case it would be more to the relationship between the elf and the dwarf in "The Hobbit"
great imagination finishing everything and I hope that you write another adventure ... that matter of the spirits can not be left that short
I've never seen the Lord of the Rings complete D: But it's ok, it's the first reference in the world for magic kindowns and elf, and orc, and all those things.