Steemotion Contest - Feelings of Fear - "The Fear Blinds Us"

in #steemotion7 years ago (edited)

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I ran without a fixed direction, I only ran at full speed. Panting and exhausted my body collapsed, I felt fall as the beads of sweat that slid down my forehead. I took one last look over my shoulder and i saw him, he was coming towards me at full speed with a sharp knife that he took from the kitchen.

His look was voracious, he was hungry for me, for my life. I kept running as long as I could until I managed to enter a small uninhabited house that was located in the neighborhood. I had screamed so much that I felt my throat burning, nobody heard me, nobody came, nobody helped me.

Once inside the construction I started to look for something with which I could defend myself, but I only found dust and misplaced furniture, I hide under a table, the place lacked light, everything looked a little gray and some rays of light coming from the street came through the windows.

I could hear my heart beating behind my ears, my whole body shuddering, I listened to myself sobbing in the silence that invaded the room. He had not entered yet. Little by little the tears ran out of my eyes and my chest contracted.
I heard the wood under his feet when he entered, he was bigger than me, stronger and more sanguine, i had no chance. His big, heavy steps made the little house crunch. He called me by my name, it was almost like a sweet song, he hummed a little while he moved the furniture, he called me, he repeated my name again and again, i just wanted he to stop ... but he did not. Fear seized me. My limbs were frozen and only inaudible prayers came out from my lips.

Through my mind came and came images that I thought the time had taken, but there they were. I saw the smile of my parents every morning when I woke up, I saw the hands of my mother on my forehead when she cured my illnesses, I could even smell the hot coffee that they prepared in the morning. I remember to know him, i remember how I gave him my innocent lips and my whole purity and now I was about to let him take my life.

His boots landed right in front of me, but he had not found me yet. Having him so close to me only brings me closer to the moment of my death.

I was terrified, my systems collapsed and fear became the master of my whole being, as a ruthless current invaded every corner of my soul leaving me at the mercy of fate.

Darkness. I only saw darkness, nothing to my right, nothing to my left, only a thick black veil that had covered my eyes completely. I felt weak, fragile and helpless. Amid the confusion I tried to understand what was happening, but each time the darkness deepened. A scream came from the deepest part of me, my eyes were gone, I blinked as fast as I could but only managed to make the tears spill faster.

Savor in my tongue the bitterness of the panic that grew in my stomach and I heard ... His warm breath next to my ear, he let out a small laugh between his teeth, we were both under the table, he came as close as he could and he took my head hard.

-Fear blinds us - He planted a kiss on my cheek and buried the knife into my throat - I love you.

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This is amazing. I was bound until the end of it. Beautiful imagery and apt description.

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Thank you for the opportunity!! I will be practicing my English for your other contests. A hug from Venezuela<3